tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9128647251509289695.post4118596321659843462..comments2023-06-14T03:23:22.224-07:00Comments on the secret to happiness is water: Happinessclarabellehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11538636833678217766noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9128647251509289695.post-3158666650133980222011-08-23T16:14:54.644-07:002011-08-23T16:14:54.644-07:00Hi, I saw your post about this on Reddit and decid...Hi, I saw your post about this on Reddit and decided to post my answer to your question here rather than on there.<br /><br />So yeah, the "mostly dialogue" thing really does work for a piece like this and I think you did a good job with it. I didn't find myself at all questioning which character was talking. Though, I would imagine that--for a longer piece--big chunks of it would make the work a chore to read and has a danger of becoming expository like big chunks of description.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com